Writing Critique Services

Critique Services

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Athletes and performing artists have coaches to help them achieve their best—why shouldn’t you?

Our critique service offers serious, honest, and supportive feedback to help you continue your development as a writer, prepare a manuscript for publication, or complete a writing project in progress.

How Does It Work?

You submit your manuscript and receive feedback by email. The manuscript receives a close reading by one of our experienced writing consultants who then composes a written critique that assesses the work and gives specific feedback. The critique is a thorough, honest analysis of your manuscript that notes what is working as well as providing suggestions and strategies for revisions.

Who Do I Work With?

Our writing consultants are experienced authors, teachers, and editors who have helped many writers improve their work and get it published.

  • Christine DeSmet [fiction, scripts, résumés]
    Christine (BA, MS, UW-Madison), an award-winning novelist and screenwriter, teaches online courses and coaches/critiques writers at UW-Madison Continuing Studies. She directs the annual June Write-by-the-Lake Writer’s Workshop & Retreat, where she leads a master class for novelists.
  • Angela Rydell [poetry, college application essays/personal statements]
    Angela (MFA, Warren Wilson College) has been a writing coach and instructor for Continuing Studies since 2006. She’s a recipient of the Poets & Writers’ Writers Exchange Award and a Pushcart Prize nominee. Her fiction and poetry have been published in many journals.
  • Laurie Scheer [fiction, nonfiction, scripts, resumés]
    Laurie (MA, DePaul Univ.) is a writing mentor, professional speaker, instructor, and the director of the annual UW-Madison Writers’ Institute for Continuing Studies. She has published two books and is the founding editor of the Midwest Review literary journal.
  • Tim Storm [nonfiction, fiction, college application essays/personal statements]
    Tim (MFA, Pacific Univ.) is an award-winning writer and teacher whose work has appeared in a number of journals. His passion for storytelling and its inner workings informs his teaching, editing, and mentoring.

What Do We Critique?

We critique a wide range of writing including:

  • Novels and Novellas
  • Autobiography and Memoir
  • Short Fiction and Flash Fiction
  • Creative Nonfiction
  • Screenwriting and Playwriting
  • Poetry
  • Young Adult and Middle Grade Fiction
  • Children’s Books
  • Genre Fiction (Science Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, etc.)
  • Journalism & Feature Writing
  • Book proposals and synopses

How Much Does It Cost?

  • Prose manuscripts (novels, short stories, nonfiction book proposals, etc.): $6/page
  • Board books and picture books: $25
  • Screenplays / television scripts / stage plays: $4/page
  • Poetry: $12/page of poetry (one poem per page)

How Do I Register?

Contact Laura Kahl at laura.kahl@wisc.edu to register. You may request a specific consultant, or we can recommend one. Let us know if you have an upcoming deadline so that we can work with you to meet it. Pay by check or credit card. Please make checks payable to “UW–Madison.” For credit card payments, email Laura Kahl (laura.kahl@wisc.edu) for the online payment link.

After you’ve registered, email the manuscript to your writing consultant who will begin the critique.

Manuscripts guidelines: double-spaced, 12-point Times New Roman or similar typeface, one-inch margins (ragged right margin, not justified); title, name and contact information on first page, number subsequent pages. Scripts should follow industry standard format. Include a brief (one-page) synopsis with excerpts of longer manuscripts (no charge for this page).


Critique Services Success Stories

Ann Dallman’s YA book a winner again!
Ann Dallman, Menominee, Mich., is the winner in the multi-cultural category of the 2020 New Mexico–Arizona Book Awards with her YA novel Cady and the Bear Necklace.

Much applause for Ann Dallman’s prize-winning YA novel
Cady and the Bear Necklace, by Ann Dallman of Menominee, Mich., and published by Three Towers Press/Henschel Haus Books, is the winner of a 2020 Midwest Book Award (Young Adult category), sponsored by the Midwest Independent Publisher’s Association. The novel was also a Silver Finalist in the Next Generation Indie Book Awards and has recently won a Michigan State History Award. Dallman was also recently awarded a Member for Members Scholarship from the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators/MI Chapter. Readers’ Favorite has given the book a Five-Star review and it is included in the Top Ten of the U.P. Notable Books List.

Ann’s novel tells the story of a 13-year-old Native American girl who finds an antique Indian beaded necklace in her new home in Michigan, leading her to solve a mystery that improves her personal and family life. Prior to publication, Ann’s manuscript went through our UW–Madison Critique Services with mentor Christine DeSmet.

Fiction writer Margo Rife of Western Springs, IL, publishes two stories in literary journals

After workshopping her stories with Angela Rydell through UW–Madison Continuing Studies Critique Services, two of Margo’s rewrites were recently accepted for publication: Down a Rabbit Hole Darkly was accepted by thejjoutrereview.com and Memoir of a Lazy Eye by idleink.org. Margo’s dramatic writing is available to view on New Play Exchange.

Michael Hourston, O’Fallon, MO, publishes collection of stories

Congratulations to Michael Hourston for the paperback publication of his stories about justice, fairness, and the after-life called R.I.P.: When All Is Said And Done. Michael’s five stories in the collection were critiqued by Christine DeSmet through our UW–Madison Continuing Studies Critique Services.

Contest awards for Dave Cuzzolina of Hollidaysburg, PA

Congratulations go to Dave Cuzzolina for achieving Honorable Mention awards in two different contests for two short stories. “The Closet” earned Honorable Mention in the 2019 Lorian Hemingway Short Story Competition, and “Loose Ends” garnered Honorable Mention in the Genre Short Story category of the 88th Annual Writer’s Digest Writing Competition.

Dave received help and encouragement on both short stories from Christine DeSmet with our UW-Madison Continuing Studies Critique Services.

Detours, debut story collection by Cynthia Dennis

Unusual personality quirks of human beings create a thought-provoking and entertaining debut collection of 12 stories by Cynthia Dennis of Paradise Valley, Arizona. Publisher is CK Books Publishing. Cynthia honed her short stories through our critique services with Christine DeSmet. For publication help, she worked with Christine Keleny, a past guest instructor at UW-Madison Continuing Studies Writers’ Institute.

Robert Allen: Two poems accepted for literary publication

Robert Allen’s poems “Shells on the Beach” and “Furious Hearts” were published in Foliate Oak’s December 2018 issue.

He took both poems from first to final while working with Angela Rydell through UW-Madison’s Critique Services. Please join us in applauding Robert’s newest publications.

Kristine Zeigler’s first short story anthology puts spotlight on water wars

Writer Kristine Zeigler has published her first anthology, Cover This Country Like Snow and Other Stories (Pupfish Press, 2018).

Kristine is a third-generation Californian and environmental non-profit leader focused on preserving nature. She worked with Laurie Scheer through our Critique Services while composing many of the short stories for this book that focuses on the water wars.

Notes Laurie Scheer, “She is a perfect example of a writer who took her passion for a specific place and merged historical facts with personal wisdom to tell her stories about the Owens Valley, California – then and now.”

In these ten stories set before, during, and after the water wars between the sophisticated City of Los Angeles and the rural underdogs from the Owens Valley, the characters want one thing—to survive. Here are swashbuckling, daring, and undisciplined explorers and miners, a former prisoner at a World War II relocation camp, abused and displaced Native Americans, and even one very ancient tree, brought together across time and terrain to tell their tales. Cover This Country Like Snow evokes the Wild West in its adventure, heroism, and majestic mountain vistas. But where land and water are involved, so too is cowardice, greed, and the violent ambitions of humanity to harness the power of nature—at any cost.

From Caleb True, Dynamo Verlag Press: “There’s something very contemporary about her writing—think Pierre Michon or Sabina Murray. And there’s something very old school about it as well—the way novels used to be written, when history and nature were inseparable from fiction, like Cather, Stegner, London.”

Short story by Jane Curtis accepted for literary magazine

“Easy to Be Hard,” a short story by Madison writer Jane Curtis, has been accepted for publication by Rosebud literary magazine for their 25th anniversary December issue. She worked on the story with Christopher Chambers through the manuscript critique service.

Sarah Carlson sells YA novel

Sarah Carlson, Fitchburg, Wis., has sold her YA contemporary novel, All the Walls of Belfast, to Turner Publishing.

The novel set in Ireland will be released in bookstores and via e-book format in March 2019.

Sarah’s path to publication included a step-by-step approach using several UW-Madison Continuing Studies resources. She utilized Critique Services with Christine DeSmet for her writing and a query letter, and then joined a critique group and novel-planning course taught by Angela Rydell. She attended Weekend with Your Novel, Write-by-the-Lake Writer’s Workshop (where she received an advanced full-manuscript critique from Lori Devoti), and finally Sarah attended the Writers’ Institute (where she pitched and got her agent).

Congratulations, Sarah!

Nick Chiarkas wins John E Weaver Award

Nick Chiarkas, Middleton, Wis., has won the John E Weaver Excellent Read Award bestowed by the Earthshine Media Group for his novel, Weepers.

The award honors John Weaver, writer and founder of the Fox Croft Group, now part of Earthshine Media Group. For twenty years, Weaver worked with authors doing literary publicity and founded the Book Cover Award. He died of cancer in April 2016.

In writing his novel, Nick called on experts in UW-Madison Continuing Studies Critique Services and also attended the Writers’ Institute and Write-by-the-Lake Writer’s Workshop & Retreat.

Nick is among the speakers at the 2018 Writers’ Institute.

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